作者dukechiang (go go go)
看板GMAT
标题Re: [问题] gwd 9-39
时间Tue Sep 29 12:32:12 2009
不好意思 推文推过 不过想提供实例 这样比较好理解
先重复推文内容
D的the energy用的the限定的energy 所以最好要叙述一下
一下 the energy是哪里的energy 是怎样的energy
如果the energy in G是the energy consumed by G 而非
是produce 的energy 这样一来 才能跟the energy p in F
两者相比较
这题的D就是犯了over simplified的毛病
这有一个例子
In 1973 mortgage payments represented twenty-one percent of an
average thirty-year-old male’s income; and forty-four percent in 1984.
(A) income; and forty-four percent in 1984
(B) income; in 1984 the figure was forty-four percent
(C) income, and in 1984 forty-four percent
(D) income, forty-four percent in 1984 was the figure
(E) income that rose to forty-four percent in 1984
ANS B
你可以看一下C为何不可以 道理是相同 1984年的44%并未说明是不是平均30岁男性的
income的比例 这有可能 44%是三十岁女性or各种可能
就像"Yesterday I ate three apples, and today five."
这里今天吃的五个频果是昨天同一堆里的APPLES 还是今天另外的新苹果呢?
若句子改为Yesterday I ate three apples, and today I ate five of them.
那是不是很清楚可以看出是昨天同样堆的苹果呢?
参考看看吧!!
※ 引述《chenemily (天天保持好心情)》之铭言:
: Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power,
: while in Germany it is just over 33 percent.
: A.while in Germany it is just over 33 percent
: B.compared to Germany, which uses just over 33 percent
: C.whereas nuclear power accounts for just over 33 percent of the energy
: produced in Germany
: D.whereas just over 33 percent of the energy comes from nuclear power in
: Germany
: E.compared with the energy from nuclear power in Germany, where it is just
: over 33 percent
: 请问这题C&D该怎麽选比较好
: 答案是C
: 我觉得D的句子结构挺好的
: 谢
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