作者wayshawn (托完福好累......)
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标题Re: [语文] GWD TN8 Q20
时间Tue Sep 22 11:05:20 2009
※ 引述《denizee3 (妮)》之铭言:
: In the mid-1970's, since birds were overcome by pollution, and routinely falling
: from the sky above Los Angeles freeways, this prompted officials in California
: to devise a plan that reduced automobile emissions.
: C. birds had been overcome by pollution and routinely fell from the sky above
: Los Angeles freeways, prompting officials in California to devise a plan
: that reduced
: D. birds overcome by pollution routinely fell from the sky above Los Angeles
: freeways, prompting officials in California to devise a plan to reduce
: Answer: D
: 想要请问一下C错在哪?
时态移转是C的缺点,违反一致性...老莫说,同一个句子中,时态不要乱移转
兔大说过:过去完成式+过去式,必错.
(但我忘记为什麽必错了...=_=||,上课时在晃神)
另,plan後面接to表目的,似乎是比较有效的表达方法 <--这个点应该有例外
: 还有"birds overcome by pollution routinely fell..."这句要怎麽翻?
: 跟原本的"by pollution and routinel fell..." 有什麽不同?
overcome by pollution修饰birds,动词是fell
这样的表达比原先的方式简洁
似乎有移转句子的重心(原先为主句的移到关代),但这样的移转应该是合理且更有
效的表达,何况这题ABE都有明显的错误,CD决选的话,选D是比较好的
: 谢谢!!!
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1F:推 pentimento:过去完成式+过去式,必错 <- 好奇这句话,谁能解释? 09/22 12:20