作者eana (6%失业率 3聚氰胺 3鹿)
看板GMAT
标题[写作] 请问几题AWA的点~
时间Mon Jun 22 21:48:04 2009
AA:
SmartPro Software, Inc.:
“Currently, more professional accountants use SmartPro accounting software
than any other brand. However, in the market for personal accounting software
for nonprofessionals to use in preparing their income tax returns, many of
our competitors are outselling us. In surveys, our professional customers
repeatedly say that they have chosen SmartPro Software because our most
sophisticated software products include more advanced special features than
competing brands. Therefore, the most effective way for us to increase sales
of our personal accounting software for home users would clearly be to add
the advanced special features that our professional software products
currently offer.”Discuss how well reasoned . . .etc.
AI:
Portrayals of violence have proven commercially successful in television
programs, movies, songs, and other forms of popular entertainment. Therefore,
those who create popular entertainment should continue to incorporate
violence into their products.
这题我Disagree 想了 1.除了暴力 还有其他popular的元素可以使用
2.暴力会有不好的影响 小孩模仿之类的
剩下一点我想不到~ 麻烦各位了 可以给我一点意见~ 谢谢~
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