作者chih96 (chih)
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标题[写作] AA#104篇攻击点一问
时间Mon Aug 18 23:43:31 2008
"Research indicates that those who exercise regularly are hospitalized less
than half as often as those who don’t exercise. By providing a well-equipped
gym for Saluda’s municipal employees, we should be able to reduce the cost
of our group health insurance coverage by approximately 50% and thereby
achieve a balanced town budget.”
攻击点之一为:
There is no causal relationship between the development of the employees'
health and the provision of a well-equipped gym.
想请问一下
作者认为兴建体育馆应该可以减少保险的成本
虽然文中并没有明确提到
但这应该就表示作者认为"体育馆建立後 员工会去那运动"
所以才会减少保险成本
但这并不一定 因为员工不一定会去体育馆运动
所以不知道上述攻击点可不可以说成
"gratuitous assumption"
因为之前补习没补到AWA 所以一切都得靠自己摸索 Orz
请问一下这样的思路对吗?
谢谢各位的回答~
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