作者pkuguy (janice)
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标题Re: [问题] 修饰词问题
时间Wed May 23 17:11:09 2012
我觉得这句子很怪。
应该不是正确的文法句子。
第一,本句的动词到底是在修饰什麽主词?
The notion conveys that people『according to given information and by
exercising the rule of thumb to make a decision』is often the case.
把中间的多出来的元素用括号隔开後,发现 is often the case的主词
是people,但句意错且文法也不通。
照理说,is often the case应该是修饰 the notion,但它已有动词conveys,怎麽又跑
出一个动词?一句子一个动词,若要再加动词就要经过处理,如再连接词and或是把第二
动词改成分词。
再来,若 is often the case的主词是「观念」notion,这样也很难讲得通,
「观念」又怎麽可能是「常有的例子」?
因此我觉得这句可能要改成
As is often the case, people often make a decision based on the given
information and by the rule of thumb.
当然这样句意可能就你原本要表达有点不同。
※ 引述《diera74 ( )》之铭言:
: 请教版上各位
: 下面这个句子的修饰语法有没有错误:
:
: The notion conveys that people according to given information and by
: exercising the rule of thumb to make a decision is often the case.
: ^^^^^^^^
:
: 用to make 对吗?还是要用making?
: 怎麽改写会比较好呢?
:
:
: 麻烦大家,会再附上100P表示谢意~:)
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