作者jt910203 (aa)
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标题[写作] 请各位帮我改作文...
时间Fri Jan 27 22:53:54 2012
这题目是中级复试的
题目是要写出电子邮件对我们的影响之类的
With the development of the Internet,e-mail is getting more and more popular,
we nearly can not do any work without e-mail. For example, I am used to
logging my e-mail to receive some pieces of news and entertainment
information that will kill my boring time and make me relax. The most
important function of email for me, is to hand out my papers to professors.
E-mail is also playing an important role in business. For instance, in my
intern company, they always use e-mail to do a lot of things like checking
the order list or businessing with clients. It can save more time and money
than traditional methods like telephone and letter. As a result, e-mail is so
convenient for all of us.
请各位大大帮我改一下,并且帮我看看这样的水准...复试会不会过
3q!
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1F:推 boat728:我觉得结构有点奇怪 ....我是用作文结构来看的... 01/28 23:55
2F:→ jt910203:谢谢你喔 我会注意的~ 01/30 10:40