※ [本文转录自 AC_Music 看板] 作者: Attui (吃早餐的日子) 看板: AC_Music 标题: Re: [歌词] why, or why not (动画 『ひぐらしのな … 时间: Sat Sep 23 19:07:23 2006 个人尝试翻译了一下 但英文苦手... 有很多地方翻译不出来 + 语译错误 希望高手能帮忙修改 ( or 提供正确的翻译 ) ※ 引述《sakurawars20 (Narcissu)》之铭言： : why, or why not : 大嶋啓之 feat.片雾烈火 : Lyrics: interface : Music & Sound Produce: 大嶋啓之 : To get my happiness I had done everything, 为了得到幸福，除了罪恶外 : but had done nothing to be blamed and accused of. 我做了所有能作的事 : The sound of footsteps became louder every day, 但(人们的)脚步声却一日比一日响亮 ( footstep似乎可以当成行人走路的声音 所以我加上()里面的意思 个人觉得这句话应该是描写害怕 因为他并没办法完全避开罪恶..) : Then I noticed the fact there was no time. 这时我才发现，自己已经没有时间 ( 不再年轻 ? 即将衰老 ? 无法继续隐瞒 ?) : I was a believer in life to be myself always, 我曾经是个只相信自己的人 : and was asking whether I would be alive. 并以此为生存的依靠 ( 这句也许有误..因为whether这个字好像是否定了『只相信自己』这个信仰.. 不过好像也能翻译成 如果没有这个信仰 我就活不下去..?) : Give me a reason why not to adopt in this way, 能请你告诉我吗？为什麽不能用这种方式活着？ : or judge me to be guilty of so many incurable sins. 不然你究竟是靠什麽来判定我有罪？ : Tell me why, or why not. Complaining way too much, 告诉我为什麽，为什麽你如此质疑我的生活方式 (翻译省略or why not) : maybe I overlooked something fatal for me. 难道我真的错了吗？ (这句应该翻译成 也许我忽略了致命的什麽 但我刚好想到某元首...) : The whole world was at a complete standstill, 整个世界依然停滞不前 : and I was in fetters, at the mercy of the mob. 而我依然被不知为何而生的人们淹没 (fetter是脚链 mob是暴民 所以这翻译完全是引申..也许扯太远了 ) : The silent warning became louder every day. 那沈默的警告变的越来越响亮 : Then I kept pretending not to hear. 但我却决定继续装作没听到 : Its meaning had been in the eyes of beholder all along. 那些旁观者早就有自己的答案 : It had grown dark before I found a sign. 在他们眼中，我早就被定罪了 (这两句很不好翻..只好硬凹..) : "Among the nonsense tragedies, what on earth you are looking for? 在这些荒谬的悲剧中，你打算寻求什麽？ : You only have to be honest to yourself and your own fate." 你只要对自己和命运诚实就够了 : Tell me why, or why not. Complaining way too much, 告诉我，为什麽要质疑我的生活方式 : maybe I overlooked something fatal for me. 难道我真的错了吗？ : There is nobody who knows there will be nobody. 默默无名的，永远是默默无名 (此句译错的机率高达99.9%... 不过there will be nobody我至今依然听成there will be mine...orz) : Except for me, all the world has gone mad. 除了我以外，这整个世界都疯了 : So what is forgiveness you are willing to withhold? 所以呢？你打算宽恕(我)什麽？ : What is the well-being you are willing to make? 你又能给(我)什麽样的幸福？ (我觉得他应该是省略了"我" "for me" .. ) : Now what? So what? Don't you come interrupt me, oh please, 现在呢？知道了又怎样？喔，拜托 (歌词好像省略还是少了"to"..?) : while I am interrupting myself. 难道你打算在我放弃自己时，来改变我的生活？ (interrupt应该是阻止、中断或是打扰 interrupt me我想成 阻止他作某件事情..(例如持续现在的错误) interrupt oneself可能是自甘堕落 但是用这些都很怪..而且意思都是用猜的..) -- ┌内有杂七杂八 　 http://www.pixnet.net/CQD ↓ ↑ http://www.wretch.cc/album/attui 　内有万舰齐发┘ --

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