※ 引述《stabber111 (五楼是正妹!!!)》之铭言： : I have a 3-5 minutes lecture tomorrow, so I wrote a essay for lecture. : do I have some mistake in the essay?? : --------------------------------------------------------- : I choose "addicting drug by teenager" for my speaking topic. : because, when I was serving in the Army. I finded a friend in there. he is a I had a friend there. He was : teenager. but he had defferent experience that he has have served in the a teenager, a different experience had been in jail : jail. : My friend was born in a crime family. His father is a crime organize's head of gang. : leader. When he was very very young, he knew what drug is, and how to use it. He knew about drugs and how to use it while he was in childhood. : When he was 17, he join the jail by organize crime. After that, he left the He was sentenced to be in jail about 17 owing to organized crime. : jail to join the Army. but he was needing to go to police office every ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ he "had to" or "asked to" I got to question this. what i do know is that whoever has once been in jail MUST NOT join the army. or there's something i've misunderstood? : weekend. : If he had vacation on weekend. Now, he go back jail again. was jailed again. : why he always go to jail? he told me, he was very crazy when he used why does he went crazy : drugs. He usually punch somebody, take a gun to aim someone and illegal punched took had : highspeed driving. but he might not know what he is doing. finally, he told was : me, when he started to use drug, he is finished. was : This story told me, don't use drugs. I only correct some grammar errors but the words u chose. P.S. i got a exam to attend this weekend, and im now on ptt. i must be outta my mind.= = --

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