I have a 3-5 minutes lecture tomorrow, so I wrote a essay for lecture. do I have some mistake in the essay?? --------------------------------------------------------- I choose "addicting drug by teenager" for my speaking topic. because, when I was serving in the Army. I finded a friend in there. he is a teenager. but he had defferent experience that he has have served in the jail. My friend was born in a crime family. His father is a crime organize's leader. When he was very very young, he knew what drug is, and how to use it. When he was 17, he join the jail by organize crime. After that, he left the jail to join the Army. but he was needing to go to police office every weekend. If he had vacation on weekend. Now, he go back jail again. why he always go to jail? he told me, he was very crazy when he used the drug. He usually punch somebody, take a gun to aim someone and illegal highspeed driving. but he might not know what he is doing. finally, he told me, when he started to use drug, he is finished. This story told me, don't use the drug. -- 看完这则文章，你觉得？ ψstabber111 ▃▄▃ ▃▄▃ ▃▄▃ ▃▄▃ Z ▃▄▃ ▃▄▃ ▃▄▃ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ Z ︵ ︵ ︵ ︵ ＼ ／ ⊙>⊙+ □︵□ ◎ ◎ ﹊ ﹊ -◎◎- ⊙⊙ -⊙⊙- ▽ ▽ ●～ ●─● ω Ｏ //// 皿 ζ 新奇 正点 难看 无聊 伤心 害羞 震怒 --

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