作者sunstone (dale)
看板EngTalk
标题[Mind] story-cat
时间Fri Dec 12 14:26:22 2008
It was in the middle of November, the sun shining from the high
sky, with scattered clouds sprinkling in the air. On her way home back
from school, passing through a dimly, threadlike lane, weary yet relaxed,
the girl was strolling alone. Her innocent face, faintly spotlit with
the dusky twilight, let out her age--roughly ten, I guessed.
From both sides of walls in the lane, the paint, as well as cement,
almost came all off--which could come tumbling down right away, with merely
a finger's touch. Beneath the walls were waste cartons piled up on top
of each other.
Among all the cartons right there, there was one laid wide open.
Out of curiosity, the girl sneaked close, peeping into the carton;
inside was a lovely cat, so lovely that no one could have seen
it but took it home.
The girl was no exception; captured by the round, watery,
crystal-clear eyes of the cat, she drew near, slightly lifted it up,
,looked down, and then gently put it back. Away she walked, never turning
back. The cat mewed weakly, left all high and dry.
the cat:
http://dsausage.web.fc2.com/Temp/longcat.htm
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1F：推 lanceral:impressive sentences, thank u for ur story 12/13 17:25
2F：→ sunstone:not at all, it's my honor^^ and there's still a long 12/14 01:09
3F：→ sunstone:way to go on my writing<_ _> 12/14 01:10
4F：→ metalalive:wow, so many unfamiliar words I cannot understand 12/15 22:35
5F：→ metalalive:I really must study English hard 12/15 22:44
6F：推 serveto:this is literary style....of course it's neatly put 12/15 22:58
7F：→ serveto:but daily conversation doesn't have to be like that 12/15 22:58
8F：→ serveto:i'm not saying this isn't important, but if you think 12/15 22:59
9F：→ serveto:this is the ultimate..then you've overlooked the whole 12/15 23:00
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