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标题[求译] 一句话
时间Tue Sep 7 15:38:32 2010
求中译／英译：
政府努力执行由院长提出年底前失业率降至低於5%的承诺.
要是失败了,院长可能要下台一鞠躬.
属句子／段落：
我的试译：
The government has been trying all efforts to defend the policy
promised by the premier, which is to make the unemployment rate
lower than five percent by the end of the year.
If it fails, the premier's stepdown may come after.
提问：
请问这样翻译 有任何问题吗
先谢谢各位先进指导
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1F：→ PUTOUCHANG:defend the policy? 09/07 23:16
2F：→ PUTOUCHANG:...efforts to reduce the unemployment rate to less 09/07 23:22
3F：→ PUTOUCHANG:than 5% ..., which is a promise by ... 09/07 23:24
4F：→ PUTOUCHANG:The premier may step down on responsibility in case 09/07 23:27
5F：→ PUTOUCHANG:the government fails to do so. 09/07 23:29
6F：→ PUTOUCHANG:网路好顿= = 09/07 23:29
7F：→ tengharold:trying all efforts很怪 09/08 00:12
8F：→ tengharold:defend the policy 不等於 "执行" 09/08 00:12
9F：→ tengharold:which is to make... year 没错但可以更简单 09/08 00:13
10F：→ tengharold:may come after的概念用then就可以了~ 09/08 00:14