menggo(用英文写歌的人)不在 我来试试… 不过我英文也不是很好，可能也有误就是了… ※ 引述《tiamero (I'm 大娘)》之铭言： : http://tiamero.890m.com/we%20are%20forever%20friend.mp3 : -前奏8小节- : Every time I think about you : and who we are. who we are...意思是「我们是谁」耶 : To give you more. : To love you more. : To give you everything I can. 请问主词去哪里了？ 这样是否比较适当： Every time I think "of" you, "I want to" give you more, to love you more, and to show you everything I "own" : In the summer. : I wanna be a good man. : A better man. 上面这词…意思很怪…「夏天的时候，我想当个好人，更好的人」…什麽意思?? 只是「想当」，而且还不确定是「想从坏人变好人」还是「从好人变更好的人」… : *副歌2 : In the winter. : You let me hot. 你让我热…这-_-///有这样用法的吗 : You drive out the cold. 还是怀疑是否有这样的用法 : You are the best. You are the fire也许比较好？ : *副歌2 : -间奏8小节- : Every time I think about you : and who we are. : To give you more. : To love you more. : To give you everything I can. : Every time I think about we think "of" "us" : Is we only friends forever. "Are" we merely 这句也太中式英文了吧… : Can I love you. : Can I miss you. : Can I look at you. 用may比较好？不过，要不要love, miss, look at，是"I"的事， 干嘛问"you"？ 改成这样如何： Could you love me? Could you miss me? Could you gaze at me? : In the autumn. : I wanna be a better man. : The best man. : *副歌2 : You drive out the cold. : You are the best. : You let the spring, come on to here. : *副歌2 : -间奏8小节- : It is time for say good-bye. : Tonight is cold. : I only wanna. : *副歌2 : Accompany you. : It's time to go away. : I'm thank you by my side. : *副歌2 : -尾奏16小节- : (副歌2每句後面会有四个音, 不要理它) : 这次贴上来是来请各位帮忙修文法的XD : 我英文也才学9年 要体谅我一下啊XD : 要跟着唱的请跟我要谱 不然你会很辛苦噢 : 这首是跟其他人合作的 我是编曲跟写词而已 : 原曲是: 失望中的决定 -- 1月主打歌：《老了》翻唱 http://blog.xuite.net/tooodark/musicstation/15000715 2007/12/28 --

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