感觉毕业一年後的工作一直起起伏伏, 不是很稳定的状态 先後经历了补教业,与国贸公司的工作 本身很喜欢国贸方面的工作, 因为想要学很多很多的东西,目前求职也是都针对国贸人员与业务助理方面工作搜寻 想请大家帮忙看一下我的中英文自传, 有没友哪里需要加强修改的地方呢 欢迎指教!! _____________________________________________________________________ 中文自传 您好，我叫XXX，今年2X岁。对於贵公司刊登徵求国贸人员的事，本人深感兴趣。自幼 成长於小康家庭, 家里有父母与兄弟姐妹共六人，家庭气氛和睦，父母的管教非常开明与 严谨，从小就灌输我们做任何事都应采取积极主动的态度。 自认为是乐观且积极的人，因此，大学期间，我活跃於校内外打工与系上的社团活动。打 工的经验使我学习到遭遇困难时，需要耐心与智慧，来面对各项挑战。当面对无法解决的 问题时，我会主动请益主管来完成交办的事项；系学会活动的参与，则让我学习到团队合 作的重要性，以及组员间彼此意见的交流与沟通的效益。 本身对国贸的领域有极高的兴趣, 之前曾在一间国贸公司担任业务助理。在订单处理,国 贸的基本常识,或是英文书信往来等工作中收获良多,也更加深我对国贸这块领域的了解。 这份工作加深了我做事的细心谨慎度,与客户与工厂人员的沟通以及书信的互往的能力也 有所提升。 我诚挚的希望能够在贵公司担任国贸人员的工作，若能有此机会，我将全力以赴，期许自 己能细心且有效率的完成每一份指派的工作，谢谢！ 英文自传 Dear Sir: It’s my pleasure to have this opportunity to introduce myself. My name is XXX, twenty three years old. I’m quite interested in the job your company advertised about the trade personnel. Grew up in a well-off family, there are six people in my family, my parents educated us both liberal and strict; besides, they instilled in me to be a responsible and considerate individual. I characterized myself as being an optimistic and active person; hence, I was vigorous in the part-time job and joined the school affairs in the college. From the work experiences, I’ve learned to be more patient and wise to handle the difficult conditions, when I couldn’t settle the consigned works, I will consult to my boss. In addition, I’ve learned the importance about the teamwork in joining the school affairs, and the benefits of exchanging the opinions to others. I take highly interest in the trade business and have been a sales assistant before. I learned a lots in this job, not only the trade knowledge, but also the mail and order handling. This work experience expends my knowledge in the trade business and enhance my cautiousness and the communication skill, even the skill of replying the business letter. With professional yet personal attitude, I am confident that my personality and past working experiences will prepare me to be an excellent trade personnel, and be a good fit to the goals and visions of your highly regarded company. Thank you for your considerations, and forthcoming response. 因为我前一份国贸的工作只有三个月(试用期没过) 请问这样写在自传或是履历上好吗? 因为有学到基本上国贸方面要学的东西, 而这又是我目前想找的工作领域方面 想说提出来好像会比较有竞争力货是说服力之类的 还请大家帮忙指点一下了 谢谢~~ --

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