作者DanielH (D.H.)
看板CSI
标题[剧情] 翻译CSI:Miami 1x01 Golden Parachute(3)
时间Tue Aug 3 12:50:48 2010
这次拖的比较久才PO出下一个部份
不过目前整篇已经大致翻完,会再慢慢把剩下的PO上来
依然感谢先前有回覆和观看的版友们^^
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SCENE #11:
第十一幕
[EXT.
(注1) -- DAY]
[外景 – 白天]
(Speedle and Delko have found a passenger strapped in his seat next to red
evidence flag #24. Speedle snaps photos of the body. Delko looks at the
body, impatient to get going.)
(史毕和戴可在红色证据旗24号旁发现一位乘客被绑在位子上。史毕替屍体拍了几张照,
戴可查看着屍体,不耐烦地想开始动作。)
ERIC DELKO: Hey, Herb Ritts, come on. You want to do this while we're
young, or what?
艾瑞克.戴可:嘿,赫柏.瑞茨,拜托,时不我待!
TIM SPEEDLE: I need a minute.
提姆.史毕:给我一分钟。
ERIC DELKO: Look, how about I take the pictures and you go out there and
backstroke through that crap?
艾瑞克.戴可:听着,不如我来拍照,你去外面在一堆排泄物中仰泳如何?
TIM SPEEDLE: Are you all right?
提姆.史毕:你还好吧?
ERIC DELKO: Yeah, I'm fine. Are you all right?
艾瑞克.戴可:我没事,倒是你呢?
HORATIO CAINE: Gentlemen?
何瑞修.肯恩:各位?
(Speedle and Delko both turn toward Horatio and Megan who are standing just
off to the side.)
(史毕和戴可双双转身,何瑞修和梅根就站在一旁。)
ERIC DELKO: Sorry, H.
艾瑞克.戴可:抱歉,老何。
HORATIO CAINE: Stay focused.
何瑞修.肯恩:集中注意力。
TIM SPEEDLE: We were just talking about after a plane crash like this they
used to find all these passengers without any feet. They couldn't figure out
why. But it turns out there's a support bar under the seat that was acting like a
guillotine.
提姆.史毕:我们刚才还在说,以前在这样的空难後,不知道为什麽屍体都会断脚。後
来发现是因为在椅子下有根支撑杆,就像断头台一样。
(As he talks, Horatio kneels down next to an empty passenger seat. He sees
something. Megan kneels down next to him, looking at the same thing.)
(当史毕说话时,何瑞修在旁边的空乘客椅,蹲下看见了些什麽。梅根在他旁边一样蹲下
,看见了一样的东西。)
HORATIO CAINE: This seat belt is unbuckled and undamaged.
何瑞修.肯恩:安全带没有固定住,而且完好无伤。
(Quick close-up of the dirty seat belt buckle. End of close-up.)
(快速特写在肮脏的安全带锁扣上。 结束特写。)
TIM SPEEDLE: Well, the flight wasn't full. That's, uh, six passengers,
eight empty seats.
提姆.史毕:这架班机没有客满。有,痾,六名乘客,八名空位。
HORATIO CAINE: Yeah, but I've already counted nine unbuckled belts, so, that
would mean one of the passengers was unbuckled during takeoff, doesn't it?
何瑞修.肯恩:是的,但我计算有九条未扣上的安全带,那麽,也就是说起飞时有一位乘
客没有系安全带,对吧?
TIM SPEEDLE: It might have been the guy who shot the pilot.
提姆.史毕:可能就是开枪射杀驾驶员的凶手。
(Horatio and Megan both stand up.)
(何瑞修和梅根站起。)
HORATIO CAINE: It might have been.
何瑞修.肯恩:有可能。
(Speedle turns and walks away. Megan looks around at the other workers.)
(史毕转身走远,梅根四处查看其他的队员们。)
MEGAN DONNER: How's everyone holding up?
梅根.唐那:大家状况还好吗?
HORATIO CAINE: They're fine. They're doing their jobs.
何瑞修.肯恩:他们很好,尽忠职守着。
(Horatio reaches down and picks up a briefcase.)
(何瑞修伸手拾起一个公事包。)
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镜头切换:
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(注1) EXT. 後来有好心版友指点
为exterior,也就是我们一般俗称的外景
不过大部分把它省略翻译,因为括号内主要是说明地点和时间
後面会出现INT. 和EXT.则是相反的字词
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SCENE #12:
第十二幕
[EXT. TENT -- DAY]
[帐篷 – 白天]
(Horatio forces the briefcase open. He finds it empty. Calleigh is in the
tent working on something else.)
(何瑞修用力打开公事包,发现里面是空的。卡莉在帐篷内忙别的事。)
CALLEIGH DUQUESNE: What have you got?
卡莉.杜肯:你找到什麽?
HORATIO CAINE: Nothing.
何瑞修.肯恩:什麽都没有。
(Calleigh stands up and walks over to Horatio.)
(卡莉站起走向何瑞修。)
HORATIO CAINE: Not a pen, not a piece of paper not a paper clip -- nothing.
Who travels with an empty briefcase? That's odd, right?
何瑞修.肯恩:没有笔,没有纸,没有回纹针 – 都没有。谁会带着一个空公事包旅行?
很奇怪吧?
CALLEIGH DUQUESNE: Yeah.
卡莉.杜肯:是啊。
ERIC DELKO: (o.s. shout) H, come on!
艾瑞克.戴可:(镜头外 大喊) 老何,快过来!
(o.s. = off screen)
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镜头切换:
SCENE #13:
第十三幕
[EXT. - DAY -- CONTINUOUS]
[外景 – 白天 – 持续着]
(Delko and a couple of officers carry a man onto the ground,)
(戴可和一对警官扛着一名男性来到地上。)
ERIC DELKO: (shouts) Rescue, I need a paramedic, now!
艾瑞克.戴可:(大喊) 我需要医护人员,快点!
(They put the man down on the ground.)
(他们把男人放置地面。)
ERIC DELKO: We got one with a pulse!
艾瑞克.戴可:他还有脉搏!
(Water spurts from the man's mouth as Delko presses down on the man's chest.)
(戴可按压男人胸部,他吐出水来。)
HORATIO CAINE: (o.s.) Eric, don't let him go into shock!
何瑞修.肯恩:(镜头外) 艾瑞克,别让他陷入休克!
(Horatio runs toward them and grabs a blanket. He opens the blanket and
covers the man as he kneels down next to Delko.)
(何瑞修跑向他们并抓着一条毯子,在戴可旁跪下,并打开毯子盖在男人身上。)
ERIC DELKO: Got a pulse, H!
艾瑞克.戴可:有脉搏了,老何!
HORATIO CAINE: Sir, sir, can you hear me?! Stay with us!
何瑞修.肯恩:先生,先生,听得到吗?! 保持清醒!
ERIC DELKO: Breathe, breathe!
艾瑞克.戴可:呼吸,呼吸!
HORATIO CAINE: Stay with us!
何瑞修.肯恩:保持清醒!
FADE TO BLACK.
镜头淡出
(COMMERCIAL SET)
(广告时间)
FADE IN
镜头淡入
[EXT. VARIOUS EVERGLADES (STOCK) - DAY]
[各种沼泽地景色 – 白天]
(STOCK)的话,和人讨论後推测应该是指在实地拍摄的外景
SCENE #14:
第十四幕:
[EXT. LEVEE 67 -- DAY]
[67号堤防 – 白天]
(The paramedics carry the survivor on a stretcher. Horatio is on the phone
walking along side them.)
(医护人员将生还者抬上担架,何瑞修边讲电话边陪他们走。)
HORATIO CAINE: (to phone) Okay, I'll meet you there. Good.
何瑞修.肯恩:(对着电话) 好的,我在那里和你碰面。很好。
(Delko jogs to catch up with them. He fills Horatio in on the man's
identity.)
(戴可小跑步追上他们,告诉何瑞修关於生还者的身分。)
ERIC DELKO: H, we got a Scott Erik Sommer. Resides in Gables Estates.
艾瑞克.戴可:老何,他叫史考特.艾瑞克.萨默,住在盖布尔庄园。
HORATIO CAINE: He's unconscious but hold on, guys.
何瑞修.肯恩:他仍陷入昏迷,但是等一下各位。
(The paramedics stop.)
(医护人员们停住。)
ERIC DELKO: Well, he can't tell us anything then.
艾瑞克.戴可:他没办法告诉我们任何事。
HORATIO CAINE: Maybe he can.
何瑞修.肯恩:也许他可以。
(Horatio looks at Scott Erik Sommer's jacket and clothes.)
(何瑞修看着史考特的外套和衣服。)
HORATIO CAINE: What do you see? No friction burn, right? Means no seat
belt.
何瑞修.肯恩:你们没发现吗? 没有摩擦性烧伤,对吧? 也就是说没系安全带。
ERIC DELKO: So, he might be our shooter.
艾瑞克.戴可:那麽他可能是我们的枪手。
HORATIO CAINE: Yes. The question then becomes why would you shoot your own
pilot? Thank you, gentlemen.
何瑞修.肯恩:是的。现在问题变成为什麽你射杀自己的驾驶员? 谢谢各位。
(The medics carry the stretcher off screen. Horatio turns and motions to the
helicopter that's about the land.)
(医护人员们抬着担架离开镜头外。何瑞修转身示意直升机着陆。)
MEGAN DONNER: Horatio?
梅根.唐那:何瑞修?
(Megan walks up to Horatio. He turns around.)
(梅根走向他,何瑞修转身过来。)
HORATIO CAINE: Yeah.
何瑞修.肯恩:是的。
MEGAN DONNER: Got a call about a floater five miles from here.
梅根.唐那:接获关於一具浮屍的通报,离这里五哩远。
HORATIO CAINE: I ... I can't possibly take another scene right now.
何瑞修.肯恩:我…我现在不可能再处理另一个现场。
MEGAN DONNER: Horatio, it is your scene.
梅根.唐那:何瑞修,这是你的现场。
CUT TO:
镜头切换:
[EXT. EVERGLADES (STOCK) -- DAY]
[沼泽地 – 白天]
(Camera moves low and fast along the everglades toward the new spot five
miles away.)
(压低的镜头快速地沿着大沼泽地朝向五哩远的新地点。)
SCENE #15:
第十五幕
[EXT. FIVE MILES FROM LEVEE -- DAY]
[离堤防五哩远处 – 白天]
(A womans' body floats face-down in the waters. Horatio and Megan stand in
the boat just next to the body. Horatio looks up at the sky.)
(一名女屍脸朝下浮在水上。何瑞修和梅根站在屍体旁的船上,何瑞修看向天空。)
HORATIO CAINE: Oh-kay.
何瑞修.肯恩:好的。
(Megan also looks up at the sky.)
(梅根也抬头看向天空)
ALEXX WOODS: (v.o.) How did you get so far away from your friends?
艾利丝.伍德:(旁白口吻) 你是怎麽离其他人那麽远的?
(v.o. = voice over 抱歉打错了 囧)
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SCENE #16:
第十六幕
[INT. CSI - FORENSIC AUTOPSY -- DAY]
[CSI验屍室 – 白天]
(Alexx Woods prepares to examine the body of the woman found. She puts her
gloves on.)
(艾利丝.伍德准备替发现的女性验屍,她戴上手套。)
ALEXX WOODS: (to the body) Did you fall out of that plane? Is that how you
ended up all alone out there? All by yourself?
艾利丝.伍德:(和屍体讲话) 你是摔出飞机,才孤单一个人在那里吗?
(Alexx brushes the hair away from the body's face.)
(艾利丝把屍体脸上的头发拂开)
ALEXX WOODS: (to the body)
In more ways than one, I'll bet. Only woman on
board. That couldn't have been easy. You were with them but not one of them.
艾利丝.伍德:(和屍体讲话) 我打赌很多层面都是这样。机上唯一的女性,这可不简单
。你和他们在一起,却不属於他们任何一个。
(Behind her, Megan listens and turns around.)
(梅根在艾莉丝後面听着,然後转身。)
MEGAN DONNER:
"All-boys express." Been on that flight.
梅根.唐那:”男人俱乐部”,我懂那感觉。
(Without turning around, Alexx shares a smile with her.)
(艾利丝没回头,但莞尔一笑。)
HORATIO CAINE: (o.s.) (overhead) Ladies ...
何瑞修.肯恩:(镜头外) (从头顶上方) 女士们…
(Megan and Alexx look up. From the viewbox above, Horatio watches.)
(两人抬头看,何瑞修从观察区看着。)
HORATIO CAINE: We may have an ID on the flight plan. "Christina Maria
Colucci" was Sommer's senior accountant.
何瑞修.肯恩:飞行计画上有她的身分,”克莉丝提娜.玛丽亚.克鲁奇”,是萨默的资
深会计师。
ALEXX WOODS: (smiles to the body) Hello, Christina.
艾利丝.伍德:(对屍体微笑) 哈罗,克莉丝提娜。
(Alexx moves the cloth covering the body a little lower. Horatio watches
from the computer monitor up above.)
(艾利丝把盖在屍体上的衣服稍微往下移,何瑞修从上方的电脑萤幕观察着。)
ALEXX WOODS: (over speaker) Preliminary exam indicates no friction burns on
her lower torso.
艾利丝.伍德:(透过扩音器) 初步检查指出下半部没有摩擦性烧伤。
HORATIO CAINE: Which also means no seat belt and a second passenger was out
of their seat. I rule out the bathroom, then.
何瑞修.肯恩:也就是说,没有系安全带,而且是第二位不在位子上的乘客。那麽就不是
洗手间了。
MEGAN DONNER: Mile-high club?
梅根.唐那:高空俱乐部?
HORATIO CAINE: I don't think so. It's such a small plane, it would be hard
to have an indiscreet affair with your boss, I think.
何瑞修.肯恩:我不认为。这是小型客机,要和你的老板偷情可不容易。
MEGAN DONNER: Not if he was picking up the tab. This stuff's all designer.
梅根.唐那:不然就是他付的帐,这东西可是有品牌的。
(She picks up a red, high-heeled shoe.)
(她拿起一只红色高跟鞋。)
MEGAN DONNER: Red suede. 450 bucks a pair. Price alone could have killed
her.
梅根.唐那:红色麂皮,一双450美元。光是价钱就足够杀死她了。
(Horatio chuckles softly. A tech passes a file to him. He takes it and
listens.)
(何瑞修轻声地笑了笑,一名技师递文件给他,他接过倾听着。)
ALEXX WOODS: I put a rush on her tox screen. Blood alcohol is point-o-nine.
艾利丝.伍德:我替她做了毒物检测,血液中酒精浓度为0.09。
MEGAN DONNER: Legally drunk at eight o'clock in the morning?
梅根.唐那:早上八点就在喝酒?
ALEXX WOODS: We also found traces of fluoxetine. She was on prozac.
艾利丝.伍德:还发现了微量的氟西汀,她曾服用百忧解。
MEGAN DONNER: Who isn't?
梅根.唐那:谁不是呢?
(Megan looks up and sees Horatio reading a file.)
(梅根抬头看,何瑞修正读着一份文件。)
MEGAN DONNER: Anything you want to share?
梅根.唐那:有任何要分享的吗?
HORATIO CAINE: Not currently. Could I have a grid, please?
何瑞修.肯恩:目前还没有,可否让我看一下网格图?
(The monitor above Horatio shows the body on the examining table. A
green-lined grid appears over the monitor.)
(何瑞修上方的萤幕显示出验屍台上的屍体,绿色线条的网格图布满整个萤幕。)
HORATIO CAINE: C-six enlarged, please.
何瑞修.肯恩:请放大C6肌群。
(A blocked portion of the body's right arm enlarges.)
(屍体右手的部分区块被放大了。)
HORATIO CAINE: Zoom times four and hold.
何瑞修.肯恩:请放大四倍并停住。
(The monitor shows a close up of the two circular marks on her right hand.)
(萤幕特写在她右手上的两个圆形记号。)
HORATIO CAINE: Zoom eight times and hold.
何瑞修.肯恩:请放大八倍并停住。
(The monitor shows an extreme close up of the marks on her right hand.)
(萤幕放大特写在她右手上的伤痕。)
HORATIO CAINE: (quietly) What in the heck are those?
何瑞修.肯恩:(轻声地) 那些到底是什麽?
(Down on the floor below, Alexx turns away from the monitor and reaches for
the body's hand.)
(在下方的楼层,爱莉丝从萤幕转过头,检查屍体的手。)
ALEXX WOODS: Could be impact related.
艾利丝.伍德:可能是撞击造成的。
MEGAN DONNER: Something she hit?
梅根.唐那:她撞到东西?
HORATIO CAINE: Or something that hit her.
何瑞修.肯恩:或是东西撞到她。
(Quick flash of: [INT. AIR PLANE - DAY] The plane is crashing and items on
board are flying wildly in the cabin. The other passengers shout with alarm
in the chaos.)
(快速闪现:[飞机内 – 白天] 飞机正在坠毁,舱内的物品正四处飞窜,其余乘客处於一
片混乱叫喊着。)
(End of flash.)
(结束闪现。)
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镜头切换:
SCENE #17:
第十七幕
[INT. CSI - HORATIO'S OFFICE -- DAY]
[CSI何瑞修的办公室 – 白天]
(Open on a photo of Christina Colucci.)
(克莉丝提娜.克鲁奇的照片打开着。)
HORATIO CAINE: She's a lovely girl.
何瑞修.肯恩:她是个可爱的女孩。
(Horatio looks at the photo for a moment, then puts it aside.)
(何瑞修注视着照片片刻,然後放到一旁。)
HORATIO CAINE: Mrs. Colucci, I found this at the crash site.
何瑞修.肯恩:克鲁奇夫人,我在坠毁现场发现这个。
(Horatio shows Mrs. Colucci a photo of Christina's briefcase.)
(他给克鲁奇夫人看一张克莉丝提娜的公事包照片。)
HORATIO CAINE: It was empty and it has what I believe are Christina's
initials on it. I was wondering if that belonged to her.
何瑞修.肯恩:它是空的,而且有我确信是她的首字母在上头,我想知道这是否属於她。
MRS. COLUCCI: (crying) We, um ... we gave that to her when she got her
promotion.
克鲁奇夫人:(哭泣着) 这…这是我们送给她当做升迁之礼的。
(He puts the photo aside.)
(何瑞修把照片放到一旁。)
HORATIO CAINE: Has she, um ... recently ... suffered any setbacks either
personally or professionally?
何瑞修.肯恩:她…最近…是否个人或事业上有遭受任何挫折?
MRS. COLUCCI: Not that I know of. (He nods.) My daughter battled
depression when she was in high school. That was a very long time ago. She would never
try to hurt herself ... would she?
克鲁奇夫人:据我所知没有。(何瑞修点头) 我女儿高中时曾忧郁症缠身,已经是很久以
前的事了。她不会故意伤害自己…会吗?
HORATIO CAINE: I don't know.
何瑞修.肯恩:我并不清楚。
MRS. COLUCCI: Ever since she was a little girl she was so good at keeping
secrets.
克鲁奇夫人:这孩子从小就很懂得保密。
(She starts crying.)
(她开始大哭。)
MRS. COLUCCI: Will you help me, please?
克鲁奇夫人:你会帮我吗?
HORATIO CAINE: (nods) I will.
何瑞修.肯恩:(点头) 我会的。
(Mrs. Colucci cries. Horatio reaches over and puts his hand over her hand.)
(克鲁奇夫人仍哭泣着,何瑞修伸手过去放在她的手上。)
HORATIO CAINE: I will.
何瑞修.肯恩:我会的。
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镜头切换:
SCENE #18:
第十八幕
[EXT. TENT -- DAY]
[帐篷 – 白天]
(Calleigh is looking through a scope.)
(卡莉正透过内视镜检查。)
[SCOPE VIEW: The rivets in the plane's structure.)
[内视镜影像: 飞机结构上的螺栓。]
(The NTSB Technician walks up to her as she works.)
(NTSB技师走向她)
NTSB TECHNICIAN: Never seen one of those before.
NTSB技师:从来没见过这种东西。
CALLEIGH DUQUESNE: This old thing?
卡莉.杜肯:这旧玩意?
NTSB TECHNICIAN: Yeah.
NTSB技师:是啊。
CALLEIGH DUQUESNE: It's a borescope.
卡莉.杜肯:这是内视镜。
(She pulls out the tip of the scope and holds it up for the NTSB Technician
to look at. He takes off his cap.)
(她把内视镜顶端拿出来,交给技师查看,他脱掉帽子。)
CALLEIGH DUQUESNE: The SWAT boys use it for a sneak and peek. I think it's
kind of cute.
卡莉.杜肯:霹雳小组做秘密蒐证用的,我认为还蛮可爱的。
(The tip of the scope wiggles to and fro.)
(内视镜顶端来回转动着。)
NTSB TECHNICIAN: Can I take a peek?
NTSB技师:我能看一下吗?
CALLEIGH DUQUESNE: Be my guest.
卡莉.杜肯:别客气。
(Calleigh inserts the scope tip back into the plane structure. The NTSB
Technician reaches for the eye piece.)
(卡莉将配件插回去飞机结构内,技师伸手去拿目镜)
NTSB TECHNICIAN: So, uh ... what exactly are we looking for here?
NTSB技师:那麽…我们到底在找什麽?
(He looks at the scope.)
(他看着内视镜。)
CALLEIGH DUQUESNE: Ballistics evidence. We think we may have had a shooting
on the plane but so far, nada.
卡莉.杜肯:弹道痕迹。我们认为飞机上有发生过枪击,但目前为止还找不到证据。
NTSB TECHNICIAN: You know, I heard of you. You're the, uh, the "Bullet
Girl," right?
NTSB技师:你知道,我听过你。你是那个,”子弹女孩”,对吧?
(Calleigh smiles as she reaches for the eye piece.)
(卡莉取回目镜时笑了笑。)
CALLEIGH DUQUESNE: What does that make you? "Airplane boy?"
卡莉.杜肯:那你叫什麽? “飞机男孩?”
NTSB TECHNICIAN: Yeah, I guess you could say I know my way around an
airframe.
NTSB技师:是啊,我猜你可以说我是飞机通。
CALLEIGH DUQUESNE: Really? Then what are those?
卡莉.杜肯:真的? 那那些是什麽?
(After looking through the eye piece, she pushes it toward the NTSB
Technician. He looks through it.)
(卡莉透过目镜检查後,指出给技师看,他也透过目镜看。)
[SCOPE VIEW: Etchings on a bayonet pin.]
[内视镜影像:螺栓上的刻痕。]
NTSB TECHNICIAN: Those are bayonet pins. They hold the door shut.
NTSB技师:那是螺栓,用来维持逃生门紧闭的。
CALLEIGH DUQUESNE: Oh, I know that. I meant what are those?
卡莉.杜肯:我知道那个,我是说那些是什麽?
(SCOPE VIEW: Extreme close up of the etchings on the bayonet pin.)
(内视镜影像:相当靠近的特写在螺栓上的刻痕。)
NTSB TECHNICIAN: Some type of scoring. Could mean the door failed.
NTSB技师:像某种刻痕,可能是造成逃生门故障的原因。
CALLEIGH DUQUESNE: Or someone wanted it to.
卡莉.杜肯:或是某人刻意的。
(They look at each other.)
(她们看着彼此。)
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怕页数过多所以先暂时PO到这里
其实还是好多( ̄  ̄;)
这次拖比较久是因为有看过影片和多次的校对讨论
比起上次也没那麽多地方做记号
仍然欢迎版友们给予任何建议^^
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