其实这篇不是案例...是一首关於"相信"的诗 不过真的很想分享这篇...　因为她是我最喜欢的英文诗之一 偏偏诗这种东西很难翻译...(我以下先写翻译　後面再附单字） 我又不确定自己是不是抓对了她的意境.. 所以ＰＯ这篇花了特久 ^ ^" 请大家品尝一下！～ These are the days when Birds come back (候鸟回飞时) These are the days when Birds come back- A very few-a Bird or two- To take a backward look. 这是候鸟回飞时 起初仅是一两只 - (轻轻)回眸探视 These are the days when skies resume The old-old sophistries of June- A blue and gold mistake. 这是天空返古时 回到那六月呆板的诡辩 - 一个金蓝交织的错误 Oh fraud that cannot cheat the Bee- Almost thy plausibility Induces my belief. 啊!瞒不了蜜蜂的骗局 差一点道貌岸然的你 勾引了我的信仰 Till ranks of seeds their witness bear- And softly thro' the altered air Hurries a timid leaf. 直到列队的种子刺裸裸的见证- 悄悄划过变样的气息 一片羞涩、慌忙的叶子 Oh Sacrament of summer days, Oh Last Communion in the Haze- Permit a child to join. 啊!夏季的盛典 迷雾中最後的盛宴 请容许一个孩子参予- Thy sacred emblems to partake- Thy consecrated bread to take And thine immortal wine! 共享您神圣的仪式 您奉献的面包 以及您、永生的酒 Sophistry 诡辩 (嘴炮!?) Plausibility可信性 (我将它翻为道貌岸然) Induces诱导 (我将它翻为勾引) Sacrament圣事 (我翻为盛典) Communion 思想交流 (这里只圣餐) Consecrated (神圣、奉献) 希望这篇的翻译有抓到一点意境　＞　＜.. 如果大家觉得翻译有误;或是有想到更好的字眼可用请告诉我喔！ Hope you enjoyed! --

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