※ 引述《jamesinjames (小海豚)》之铭言： : In the begging, please allow me to use poor English to type, mainly ^^^^^^^^^^ did u mean 'beginning?' : because I want to improve my English more. : Yesterday after finish the long day blue mountain, the Janpeness friend and I finishing : decide to went to the China town to find something interesting and something decided to go : of the living supple, I want to but the port portter and my Janpeness ^^^^^^^^^^^^^?? ^ where's your verb?? : friend want to but the ear pick, so we start to have a adventure in the China ^^^ did u mean 'buy'? started an : Town... and finally I found my meat and he also find his ear pick, ^^^^^^^ ur meat@@!! found : and jsut find a Chinese restaurant to have a meal, then we jsut walk on the found walked (ur sentence is too long..too many commas..hoo) : street which located on the cross of Geroge St and poolreiver St... ^is (or omit which+is) : when wejsut ask someone about how to get to the China town... asked ^^^deleted : there are two pretty women, with the brown hair and pretty smile were ^^^delete smiles : looks like the local Australia girl, and they just ask me: looked ^^^delete asked : Excuse me, can you do me a favor ? ... : During that moment I had been one day long walk ... and that sounds like ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ sorry i cant get your point.... sounded : want to borrowed money or something cheat, defraud... borrow : so I jsut directly say...maybe not... and go away she still stand there and said went ^(.) stood : say WHY ? ... said : After I came back I feel sorry to act so cold to people, maybe I should felt : tell them to request the police... but during that moment I am so tired was : So I just reject, but I still very curious aboout ... what kinds of help rejected them (+ object) about ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ : are they looking for help ? Does anyone have meet this situation ? ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^ just revise it .. double verb. or you can say 'Has anyone met this situ. before?' ===== 竟然变成认真魔人了= = 不过我只改了文法部份 语意还有太长的句子 文章结构我都没有改了 ㄟ斗 板主改文章就这麽一次了阿 看在你很用功想练习英文的心意 不过要练习英文可以去Engtalk板喔 那边有人可以帮你订正 可以互相切磋 补个啾咪^.< --

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