我最近开始在想何谓关於IELTS作文模板, 因为我以前写的很顺的方式(前言/正方/反方/结论), 有考官说他会觉得有点像是模版, 因为我正方或反方的主题句大多是... Those people who advocate this issue often have the following reasons. In contrast, opponents would argue that..... 所以想冒险改变一下写作方式,不然分数也一直上不来, 经过板友的推荐开始用众文一书,也照他的写作方式练出自己写作方式, po这一篇是想问到底何谓模板?(因为没补习,也不知道要问谁?) 还有想po一下自己写的文章让大家检验一下这样算不算抄众文的模板? (其实我自己也写的很心虚,根本就跟众文的架构差不多,只是ideas要自己想) 如果算是模版,那有什麽地方可以改进?? 请大家不要鞭的太用力! 谢谢 Topic: abortion is a kind of murder or woman's right The past few decades have seen a dramatic debate on the controversial issue of abortion. While some still hold to the conservative view that abortion should be prohibited by authorities for its nature of murder, it is my personal belief that women who have pregnancy should possess the right of abortion. The reasons for my position are as follows. As far as I am concerned, it is a mistaken connection between murder and abortion. Despite of the debatable definition about the beginning of life, it seems to me that life begins after birth/parturition. For example, how a fetus becomes viable, that is, potentially able to live outside the mother's womb, albeit with artificial equipments. Therefore, admittedly, aborting by no means equals ending up one's life maliciously. Further and even more importantly, though, the right of abortion should be viewed as the right of privacy. As women have the liberty of being pregnant, similarly, it should be women's decision on whether or not terminating her pregnancy. Of course, some would argue that the medical procedure is extremely risky in the last stage of pregnancy. Nonetheless, I would contend that right of abortion should not be totally banned, but in order to protect maternal lives, the authority has an interest in forbidding it. By way of conclusion, I hold an opinion that this problem is so complex that no divine pills can be suitable for it in the short period. However, I once reaffirm my standpoint that the liberty of abortion ought to be allowed as the explanations outlined above. -- 再次感谢愿意看完我文章的人 --

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