我英文也很爛... 也是一天到晚來版上求救... 但是我有發現一點點錯誤，我先找出我知道的部分 其他的，還是請版上的大大們幫忙囉～～ 希望大家英文一起進步^^ ※ 引述《CapriciousX (追不上的宅)》之銘言： : 我英文很弱。= = : 所以我猜我大概會錯很多地方... : 這是剛剛打的，請問我這樣打哪裡有錯誤嗎? : 可不可以請版上的高手指點一下... Orz : 我整個超弱... : I feel I am lucky because I have a warm family. ^^^^^^ that : I am active and optimistic,I also really enjoy in my work. 這句話包含兩句完整的句子會造成run-on， 兩個解決辦法：要嘛中間用句點;要嘛得加連接詞 and 第二個，我覺得應該是enjoy my work就行，不需要in my work... : So after I graduated from high school,I began to looking for job and doing. jobs，我覺得可以把and doing刪掉 因為你下一句就已經說明了.... : In the past year,I have done some job ,such as telemarketing to sale the : Internet... 如果是去年，可以用last year，如果是指前幾年，可以用in the past few years 年跟工作都是可屬名詞，要記得加s或是加冠詞(a 或是the ) : These job made me cultivate my patience,and I feel I am grow up in doing : these job. 剛上面那句一樣job都要加s，jobs 前半句有點怪怪的....但我也不會改（sorry） 後半段我會寫：and I feel that I grew more mature doing these jobs : Hope I have a chance to access to company,thank you. company也是需要加冠詞..我不知道改your company會不會不禮貌... 所以我會寫Hope I have a chance to have access to the company. --

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